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rhienellethWow, I've reached 10K on the Nemesis rewrite!
There were times I thought that would never happen. I'm sooooooo happy with how this is going! I'm hoping to be done with the major part of the rewrite by Friday. You know, the first five chapters. From there, it should be more editing/tweaking/revision, less wholesale rewrite. Although the epiphany I had last week about the universe as a whole will require more work than it would have pre-epiphany.
A line doesn't really count as much of a snippet, but here it is anyway:
She stood rooted to the spot, her head throbbing painfully, and every muscle in her body tense as the other telepath touched her mind with his, and put his hands on her.
There was something very proprietary in the way his fingers closed around her arms. She didn’t like that much.
There were times I thought that would never happen. I'm sooooooo happy with how this is going! I'm hoping to be done with the major part of the rewrite by Friday. You know, the first five chapters. From there, it should be more editing/tweaking/revision, less wholesale rewrite. Although the epiphany I had last week about the universe as a whole will require more work than it would have pre-epiphany.
A line doesn't really count as much of a snippet, but here it is anyway:
She stood rooted to the spot, her head throbbing painfully, and every muscle in her body tense as the other telepath touched her mind with his, and put his hands on her.
There was something very proprietary in the way his fingers closed around her arms. She didn’t like that much.
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Date: 2009-06-09 07:18 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-06-09 07:32 pm (UTC)I can't wait!